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Subconscious

View into an open mind.

By GARY DEANPublished 6 years ago 1 min read
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You think you’re in control but really you ain't

Your mind takes one path but that's just a feint

your subconscious alive stays true to itself

It’s like two exists instead of myself

Your hands are shaking, your nerves are all shot

Be aware of the signs before you lose the plot

It’s not hard to listen to what your heart is telling you

Don’t leave it too late, just like some fool.

My mind is on the brink, gripped like a fiend

Hunger for sleep but on the edge of a dream

This ain’t no rest that I desperately need

It’s feeding the hunger for going insane

I’m not going to let this get the better of me

I am stronger than that I’ll make you all see

Peace within and subconscious as one

Draw strength from those close, until done

Body take solace relief is at hand

Mind and subconscious, now one goal to land

So much to gain stay strong in this time

The endgame in sight keep true on the line

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About the Creator

GARY DEAN

Started writing in 2009, after getting made redundant from my job. Now it is a hobby, something I can enjoy and play about with.

https://twitter.com/Gaznt?s=09

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