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Detrimental Positivity

The usual positive mentality when pondering the unknown should, by nature, demand positive results yet, in reality, it may often produce the opposite.

By Neil KellyPublished 6 years ago 1 min read
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Tipped and misfigured are those pathetically perceived fallacies

A facade of grace may yield the young philosopher but two outcomes, a content but idiotic view or a peacefully bliss but devastating ideology.

Between the walls of that little cloth satchel of one's gathered thoughts that rests at the feet of giants,

Only to be carried heavier in mentality than the reality of desparitys design.

As the tracks lay parallel to never cross paths the youth may see an endless course, the old Perceive an endless romance.

As the mind numbs with parallel creativity, it yet draws breath from detrimental positivity.

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Neil Kelly

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