The Rain Sang. The Grass Drowned.
Personification
Personification poem
The sky cried all night long
Passing slowly along the clouds groaned.
Water came freely from those dark grey clouds,
The rain sang all throughout the night.
Shining from a distance a rainbow blushed,
Shouting the hail came smashing down.
The grass drowned,
The windows tensed,
And the playgrounds danced.
It was raining upon us.
Reduce the repetition of “groaning clouds” and “dark grey clouds”
The sky cried,
The clouds groaned,
Water came freely,
The rain sang,
A rainbow blushed.
Hail came shouting
And smashing down.
The grass drowned,
The windows tensed,
And the playgrounds danced.
All because it was raining upon us.
Go from the negative things to the positive things, it's not actually a storm in weather but a storm in life. “You have to stand in the rain to see the rainbow”
The sky cried,
clouds groaned.
Hail came shouting
and smashing down.
The grass drowned.
windows tensed.
It was raining upon us.
Water came freely.
The rain sang.
A rainbow blushed
and playgrounds danced
through the storm.
About the Creator
Emily Benson
I am a 20 years old, vegan and rescued a 2 year old chihuahua mix, Toby. I am majoring in environmental science and I plan to use all of the raise money to save animals from slaughter and create an animal sanctuary! Insta: @emilyandtobywan
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