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"A breath, morning..."

By Ben AttwoodPublished 7 years ago 1 min read
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A breath, morning

A heavy lidded dawning

A yawn, a moan

A stifle, a groan

The sun is incongruent

Little to see, scarce to move

Lots to be, plenty to do

A sundial, clocking the strokes

A moondial, polyamorous and broken

The first rays break through

Eyes to the floor,

Cover to the wall.

An amniotic weep out of the womb

Whence was tears, they are silent

Whence was wonder, it is absent

For it is never seen that,

with your eyes aimed low

Arms hanging, head bowed

Why does one life life with eyes half closed

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Ben Attwood

An aspiring Doctor, Writer and exaspirationalist. Realism, the sombre, humour and the profound.

Check back regularly for whatever I feel like writing about; at least a piece a week!

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