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Love Brings Me Up

Without you, I lose all sight in what I should do.

By Amandeezzy Published 6 years ago 1 min read
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Drowning ...

I’m so still in this Red Sea, I feel suffocated but free until you grabbed me and said look up to your success don’t you want to breath? I tilted my head all I see is red sea why am I so deep? I can’t see that I’ll succeed then you said keep paddling I’m trying but I feel like a rock going into the deep, deep hopelessness is where I’ll be. You took out your hand and started pulling me up so I kicked and I kicked again and opened an eye to see a glimpse that going up wasn’t a lie. I couldn’t look down the sea was turning black you believed in me and for that I swam fast.

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Amandeezzy

The light shines in the darkness and the darkness has not overcome it.

John 1:5

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