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Just a Little Sonnet I Wrote in 9th Grade

By Jackie SpitzPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
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His beautiful brown eyes drew me inside;

Looked nothing like those cliché ocean eyes.

His six pack, so defined, made me want to hide;

Muscles bigger than the stars in night skies.

We danced all night to the best song ever,

Hoped the magical day would never end.

We snuck around parents, very clever.

I had lots of fun, while learning to fend.

He was the best mistake I've ever made;

Personality unique, like no one,

On our adventure, we, he and I, swayed

With the wind; until I met someone,

Who, unfortunately, was his brother,

and he ended up being my lover.

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Jackie Spitz

just your local social media kid... follow me @jackieemuah on everything... donate to my crippling career? paypal: paypal.me/damnitsjackie

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