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First Thoughts

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By Ryan McDonaghPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
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Keep on keeping on.

Hi,

I’m here to be judged

Not putting it all out there

Only the pieces time can age

Which, pressure is added

As time ages all

But instead of judgment seeming bitter

Take pride in it all

Knowing that the sweetness of sharing

Helps one and one is all

Two is more and three is less

This isn’t a math’s lesson

Its just time is adding up my debt

Surreal and strange they might say

Words of wisdom act as pray

I dare the thought to talk a lot

But not aloud

This is why this is here and I’m nowhere near

All is said and all is done

Now I’m off, Bye.

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About the Creator

Ryan McDonagh

Somethingsomething.

From UK - I enjoy writing down thoughts and ideas and also do visual art.

www.ryanmcdonagh.co.uk

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