Dracula's Tower
Originally written as a narrative poem assignment for my 11th grade creative writing class.
The sky loomed over the tower
Dark and grey
The tower inhabited the forest
Surrounded by shrubbery and mud
It always rained and poured
A living thing not to be found
By this lonely stone tower
In Transylvania, Romania
Stories went around
Around the world
Of an elderly old man
Supposedly living above
He is said to be Death's right-hand man
Or maybe even Death himself
This morbid creature
Lurking inside a hollow shell
May God bless any lost soul
Who may find himself standing upon the
Devil's door
For he does not know what evil lies
before him
A poor, lost soul
A young man wandering
Does he know where he is?
He stands before the tall gates
Aggressively rapping his bruised knuckles
Upon the ancient, wooden door
The gentleman looked rough
But, nevertheless, a gentleman
Shaggy, long hair that was once well-combed
His demeanor is oddly calm
Considering the location
Without hesitation, the doors swung open
Oh, how they creaked
The rotting wood of centuries
The dark abyss that lay beyond those doors
Slowly lit up by candlelight
One by one, appeared a tiny flame
The young man entered the portal
This enchanting place
"This was a place for kings,"
the man thought to himself
A large crystal chandelier overhead
A red velvet rug beneath his muddy feet
Then he looked before him to see
A long, spiral staircase going up and up
Vanishing somewhere in the ceiling above
Stairway to Heaven, maybe?
He found himself climbing up each step
Numb, like a zombie, and dazed
As if he were under hypnosis
Up, up, and up he went
His brown eyes just barely peeked over
Enough to see the next floor
The sight horrified him
If this invisible Puppet Master had stopped
pulling his strings
He would have skyrocketed out of that place
But he was in no control
He kept walking and looking
Oh, how he hated to look
Upon silk sheets, lay three women
Each one enchantingly beautiful
Garmented in matching silk robes
Their backs arched as they swarmed
'Round a small object: a newborn babe
Red, red, everything painted red
Spilling over their lips
Dancing across their tongues
Red blood
These ghastly fiends
These horrid creatures
What kind of waking nightmare was he in?
They seemed not to notice him
Even as he came to a halt behind them
Some strange force keeping him paralyzed
A sudden coldness fell upon his shoulder
"Do you see?"—There came an eerie whisper
Which startled him beyond belief
The paralysis broke so he could spin around
The Prince of Darkness
Death himself
This was him
Standing over the young man
Six feet tall
His pale skin, a light in the shadows
Draped in a long, red robe
An elderly man, but his aura was terrifying
His presence caught the ladies' attention
Without a doubt
He could feel them creep closer behind him
They tugged at his arms and clothing
Calling out his name—Jonathan
How did they know?
What kind of devilish mind-readers spoke his name?
Had he stepped through the Gates of Hell?
Had he climbed the Stairway of the Damned?
Who were these wicked dames?
The devil's brides
The Concubines of Satan
The young Jonathan was speechless
As they continued pulling on him
As they brought him to his knees
Their cold flesh burned against his warmth
Their lips traced over his skin
Lips parting to reveal sharp canines
He felt everything
Every puncture and tear
Razors shredding his flesh
He cried for help, begged
Begging Death for mercy was pointless
The elderly man watched with a grin
His lip curled to reveal similar "weapons"
This, Jonathan could see.
They were not cannibals, as he once thought.
One word came to mind as he slipped into darkness:
Vampyre.
He was kept in a dungeon
Deep down below
With the trio of succubi
Slowly drained of life day by day
Left to languish and rot
If he were to rot, that is
Or would he become a mindless creature
Such as the four he has now encountered
Damned for eternity
To kill and watch life all around you fade
Could he ever become such a thing?
Was there anything he could do
Before Life's hourglass ran out?
He was weak, so very weak
Too weak to move
He knew he would die like this
He was dying, that he was sure of
As the room and beautiful women around him
Faded to black
Sudden rejuvenation he felt
But, dark, it still was
The room was warm
Unlike the cold chamber he had been in
In fact, there was a source of heat
somewhere
His eyes fluttered before opening
This was a different room indeed
Bright light and red canopy drapes
Everything seemed so clear and pristine
His vision had improved by thousands
It was surreal
He lifted himself up
As to see the room around him
The heat came from a fireplace
in the corner
He quickly spun his head, feeling a sudden
presence
"How is it?,"
This voice—familiar yet new
This low baritone of a voice
Which once spoke his name
Which called him to this place
"What is it I'm supposed to feel?"
These young, brown eyes weren't the same
Nothing was the same
He felt different, saw different
Everything—different
"Who are you?," young Jonathan inquired.
"I-I am a creature of many names
A fiend of myths and legends
I am the one they fear at night
Stay inside and lock your doors,
For there I may lurk
I am Dracula, heir of Dracul."
"Evil spirit of Hell, I beg you
What have you done to me?
I have seen many strange things
Cannibalistic, murderous monsters
Now I see with new eyes
What is happening to me?"
"Death," answered Dracula,
"You are experiencing what everything must
You are dead, young one
But very much alive"
Nonsense, nonsense...
"Nonsense!" Jonathan cried
"I am very much alive, that you are right
I feel as if my mind is running away on me
But I am no fool"
Silently, the creature reached for a glass
A wine glass, nothing more, neatly filled
Wine? Is that what this was?
Jonathan could not be so sure
But he was parched, so very thirsty
So when the glass was offered
He drank...
The thick, maroon liquid crept past his lips
Washed over his tongue
Like rainfall quenching a drought
The sweetest perfection
Jonathan could feel it
All of it
Coursing through his veins—Life
This euphoric feeling...
What was it?
As if on cue,
Dracula replied:
"Eternal life."
About the Creator
Briana Marie
Poetry, creative writing, character analyses, etc.
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