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Critique

How to slam back against the haters

By PC MelpezPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 2 min read
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Critique
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What is this

A dark cloud of such abyss

Work from home

Where I found success alone

I’m guilty

Of creating such beauty

In the dark

Lighten up with work of art

Whilst chosen

To mend the hearts of broken

Say the words

For me to lead the whole heard

As a king

I bare the Scorpions sting

Still in youth

My prides in the bone and tooth

All mistakes

Are done without hesitate

All your jokes

Are from fast foods and Diet Coke

Words of hate

Never brings any facts straight

You just slack

Cos talent is what you lack

Just say yes

Ain’t no need to second guess

Make a stand

To be fearless and command

For what’s right

No matter the size and height

Don’t judge me

This is who I really am, this is who I’m supposed to be

This is me

I’d rather be this, than what anybody else wants to see

Don’t like it

Well what do you all expect

Living as a normal subject

Deal with it

I don’t fear the strips and bans

I care not of your scandals and scams

What you see

Who’s health has had such effects

After facing many rejects

It’s still me

A human being and a man

This is the real me who I am

Bad things we regret so fast

Fame and fortune may not last

Some things are worth left in the past

Some people like me were outcasts

Haters can hate me all they like

They aint worth my time to pick up a fight

Critics can criticize my rights

But this is my own style of how I write

I can be such a sly devil

But I’ll know when I progress every level

I lived half my life a rebel

Struggling to pick between DC and Marvel

Life is a challenge as we face much more

The outside world can be a place of war

We wish for no bad days once you step out the door

But that’s what I went through living that life before

And here I am now to honour and adore .

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PC Melpez

I'm simply someone who loves to write stories and poetries

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  • Mescaline Brisset2 years ago

    I love the openness of your poem! It is sometimes difficult to face racism and negativity face to face, so I see writing as a platform for freedom of speech. I can see you are doing the same. Well done! We are strong and no one will tell us who we should be when the only one we can be is ourselves!

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