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Brown Eyes

A poem about an ambiguous relationship leading to a loss.

By Alesia AlesiPublished 6 years ago 1 min read
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His eyes were dark and intimidating

Yet, they gave me a comfortable feeling

Maybe it was the way stability and honesty twinkled through them

I opened myself to him, like when the clouds separate and form an entrance for the sun

Perhaps, that is the reason my soul was attracted to him

Where he was, home was, built by love and a little lust

I've never been homeless, but, when he left, I felt lost in a dark abyss

He drifted through my hands, like when you grip your fists on sand

and perhaps, you can't comprehend to understand

He was the upbeat music, blaring from the speakers in my car

He was the night, when something wild and foolish runs through your veins

He was more than just a one night ordeal

He was suppose to be mine, But, now it seems so surreal

Like a schizophrenic that can't determine reality from actuality

Was he actually mine?

Did the man of my dreams, no! The man who completed my soul

Did I really get to hold his hand? Even if it was for a brief moment in time?

It felt right, so right.

He was the right one at the wrong time

He was my brown eyes.

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Alesia Alesi

Hello! Thank you for viewing my profile. My name is Alesia. Writing is a natural talent to me. I enjoy writing poems, short stories and song lyric. I hope to record an album and also authorize a book someday!

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