A Poem That Contains Peaches
A Very Peachy Poem
Well to be correct peaches are a fruit which relates to being a physical object,
Therefore, placing peaches in a poem would be likely impossible and possibly messy resulting in a ruined notebook,
Why would someone be putting peaches in a poem anyway?
What a weirdo, put something else more relevant such as war topics and social media like everyone else. Idiot.
Can anyone really say much about peaches in any given situation?
“Oh yes, these peaches are quite soft, delectably sweet”.
Little someone thinks they’re special trying to have unique ideas.
Well you’re wrong, I am unique. Prove me wrong otherwise.
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Zoe Mullen
I like to write poetry that is both sad and funny. I'm also a great comedian.
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